Monica Stoner, Member at Large
Years ago I had the great good fortune to attend a weekend workshop with Paul Gillette. In the process of having our work analyzed, he brought up the concept: “I can teach you HOW to write but I can’t teach you WHAT to write.” It sounded quite wise, and as he was saying this in praise of something I had submitted I tucked the concept away to consider later.
Come forward through years of writing and not writing, into a time when of new experiences. I’ve had the great good fortune of judging contests. I am amazed at the quality of work entered. Even though not everything is ready to submit, it’s clear these people have put a lot of thought into their work, and have the principles of formatting, sentence structure and basic usage down pat.
Every now and then, though, I review an entry lacking in all those basic writing skills but so rich in story I’m stunned. Just as rarely I read something perfectly crafted, showing great skill in word choice yet totally lacking in imagination. Finally, I understand what Paul Gillette was telling us. Anyone can learn to write with an acceptable level of skill but not everyone can come up with a story that grabs at the reader and demands we drop everything else to finish the book.
Who would have the easier task for improvement – the person with the excellent skills but ordinary story, or the person with the great story but little idea how to organize her thoughts into words? I’m not really sure, both have a hard road ahead of them. A lot will depend on how badly they want to write, and how much it means to them to finish the book. Then the next book.
Happy writing
This week I started writing again after, literally, months of hibernation. That is, if you count a three-page synopsis and revisions as writing. I did spend a lot of time thinking about the project and tweaking the plot until I felt I had a complete story. I have to say, it felt good.
That’s the good news. The bad news is I was thinking about my story and not what I was going to blog about, so I have nothing. I don’t feel too bad about it though. You see, I started writing this week after a very long hiatus. 😀
Now if I can just keep up the momentum, maybe I’ll even finish the story. Wish me luck.
Linda McLaughlin
w/a Lyndi Lamont
The finalists for OCC’s 26th Annual Orange Rose Contest for Unpublished Writers were announced at the July meeting by contest chair, Charlotte Lobb.
This year’s finalists range the globe, from California to Georgia, Vancouver to Toronto, and even Australia by way of Paris.
And the finalists are:
Lecia Cotton Cornwall, Unmasking the Countess, Historical
Pamela Kopfler, Better Dead, Paranormal/Time Travel/Fantasy
Kate Frieman, Strong, Sweet & Haunting, Paranormal/Time Travel/Fantasy
Kathy Bennett, A Dozen Deadly Roses, Romantic Suspense
Gayle Link, w/a Vanessa Riley, Carriage of Honor, Historical
Laurie Thompson, A Sweet But Deadly Desire, Paranormal/Time Travel/Fantasy
Gabrielle Luthy, Learning How to Stay, Mainstream
Alison Pritchard, The Sons of Gregor MacLeod: Highland Promise, Historical
Jo Anne Banker, This Child is Mine, Contemporary
Cheryl Nagro, Love Thy Neighbor, Inpirational
Congratulations to all, and a big Thank You to Charlotte for all her hard work on the contest.
Final results will be announced at the October meeting.
Posted by Linda McLaughlin, Orange Rose Contest Electronic Entry Coordinator
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by Jina Bacarr
Last month I posted the book trailer for my latest Spice release, Cleopatra’s Perfume, about a woman’s insatiable appetite for sex and adventure in 1939 Cairo (also Berlin and London) when the world was teetering on the brink of war.
I put together the one-minute book trailer in color and a second trailer in color and black and white (similar to when Dorothy visits Oz in the 1939 film and the screen goes technicolor). The interesting thing is that the black and white/color trailer has gotten more hits than the color trailer.
So when fellow OCC member, Bobbie Cimo suggested I try ALL black and white, I thought, that’s a cool idea. (Thankz, Bobbie!) So I put it together and uploaded it to several sites. What’s really amazing is that on one site I received a thousand hits in one day–and on others, just a handful. So you never know…
You be the judge: Here’s the black and white book trailer for Cleopatra’s Perfume!!
Best,
Jina
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Jina Bacarr is also the author of The Blonde Geisha , Naughty Paris, Tokyo Rendezvous, a Spice Brief, and Spies, Lies & Naked Thighs, featuring an Indiana Jones in high heels.
My daughters and I love words. When one of us comes across an unusual word we share it with the others, often taking the time to look up the meaning in the dictionary. A friend and fellow author on Facebook, Brandilyn Collins, always posts a word of the day, many of them ones we’ve never heard before. My girl’s favorite so far is “tenebrific.†The meaning is gloomy or dark, which describes one of their “emo†friends at college. We always have a lot of fun rolling new words around on our tongue and trying to think how they would be used in a sentence.
In our quest to look up words, we discovered that some commonly used words have changed drastically over the years. For instance, when we use the word “nice†to describe someone, we have visions of a person who treats us with kindness. Perhaps we use “nice†to tell a friend about a dress or pair of shoes we found at a store and would like to purchase. Those definitions are listed in the dictionary, but they are not the first or even second definition. Instead, “nice†as we know it today is listed as number six in my Webster’s College Dictionary.
We found that the original meaning of “nice†came from words that meant strange, lazy, stupid, or foolish. The first definition for “nice†is difficult to please. In the Merriam-Webster online dictionary, the first definition is obsolete, but means “wanton or coy.†Nice can also mean “picky, or difficult to please.†This puts a whole new slant on referring to a person as “nice.â€
As writers words are our business. I love to use less common words throughout my writing. I don’t mind if a reader has to grasp the meaning from the context, or even take the time to look it up in the dictionary. Often, I will stop in the middle of a book to look up a word, and that never takes away from my pleasure in the story. In fact, it often increases my interest in that author’s work.
How about you? Have you come across words that you enjoy, but which aren’t commonly used? Care to share those with us? I’d love to see what words you might share with your family.
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