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The Extra Squeeze Team is Taking Questions

May 31, 2019 by in category The Extra Squeeze by The Extra Squeeze Team tagged as , , , , , ,
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Taking Questions!

Ever wonder what industry professionals think about the issues that can really impact our careers? Each month The Extra Squeeze features a fresh topic related to books and publishing. Here are some of the questions they have answered in 2017 and 2018.  Sensitivity Editors, How Much Reality and Is the F-word a Bomb.

But now they need YOUR questions. Is there a publishing or writing question that you want the answer to, but don’t know who to ask?

Let Amazon mover and shaker Rebecca Forster and her handpicked team of book professionals offer frank responses to your questions from the POV of each of their specialties — Writing, Editing, PR/Biz Development, and Cover Design.

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    Rebecca Forster | Extra Squeeze

    Rebecca Forster 

     

    USA Today Bestselling author of 35 books, including the Witness series and the new Finn O’Brien series.

    Jenny Jensen | A Slice of Orange

    Jenny Jensen

    Developmental editor who has worked for twenty plus years with new and established authors of both fiction and non-fiction, traditional and indie.

    Robin Blakely | The Extra Squeeze Team | A Slice of Orange

    Robin Blakely

    PR/Business Development coach for writers and artists; CEO, Creative Center of America; member, Forbes Coaches Council.

    H. O. Charles | A Slice of Orange

    H.O. Charles

    Cover designer and author of the fantasy series, The Fireblade Array

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    Dear Extra Squeeze Team, What Kind of Editor Do I Need?

    April 30, 2019 by in category The Extra Squeeze by The Extra Squeeze Team tagged as ,

    Dear Extra Squeeze Team, How do I know what kind of Editor to hire? What’s the difference between a developmental editor, a copy editor and a proof reader? Do I need all three?

    Rebecca Forster | Extra Squeeze
    Rebecca Forster 
    USA Today Bestselling author of 35 books, including the Witness series and the new Finn O’Brien series.

    In the spirit of full disclosure my fellow Extra Squeeze panel member, Jenny Jensen, is my editor. She has read and edited everything I have ever written.

    She is all three rolled into one for me. Other clients will use her to proofread, copy edit and/or for developmental work.

    Why do we work well together? Because a) she spends time understanding what my objective is with each book, b) she identifies shortcomings and offers suggestions on how to fix them, and c) she tells it like it is.

    The last is very important to me. I don’t want to waste her time or mine, I don’t want praise when it isn’t warranted, I love it when she gives it because it’s deserved.

    In my humble opinion, an author might possibly be able to copy edit (fix grammar, unwieldy phrasing, identify plot holes etc.) or proofread their work (missing words, typos) but it is almost impossible for us to properly evaluate the full content of our work.  


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    Jenny Jensen
    Developmental  editor who has worked for twenty plus years with new and established authors of both fiction and non-fiction, traditional and
    indie.

    Good question. Answer from an editor: yes, you certainly could need all three, but the last two are critical.

    A developmental editor works with an author at the macro level. The aim is to strengthen and/or develop the story. If you’ve hit a roadblock, or are uncertain of any aspect of your story and are looking for constructive feedback, or if working with an experienced fiction editor to bounce ideas is how you work best, use a developmental editor. Often my clients have several plot options in mind and with some energetic back and forth we find their direction.

    The developmental process can begin at any stage. I’ve worked with clients who’ve just got a premise, characters sketches. Most have a detailed outline or a completed draft. The developmental editor focuses on plot, conflict, characterization, setting, resolution and narrative flow. A good developmental editor provides educated, useful input. It’s not about telling an author how to write the story. Developmental editing is about stimulating concepts, suggesting solutions and exposing what the writer has been blind to, always respecting an individual author’s voice.

    A copy editor’s aim is to improve the writing. This is nuts and bolts editing and is done on an author’s absolute best, final draft—the one the author is confident of. Typos, incorrect grammar, punctuation, convoluted prose, poor word choice, issues with tense—anything that is incorrect or detracts from a smooth narrative flow is corrected. A copy edit is essential for a professional product, a book that stands the best chance to capture and keep readers, especially those who provide the all-critical reviews.

    Proof reading is the final, micro level polish and can be done in conjunction with a copy edit. The proof reader catches errors that have been overlooked: there for their, your for you’re, to for too, etc., but also focuses on missing commas, dropped quotation marks, transposed words or letters. The list of possible errors that can slip past eyes that have been intent on story sense is scary. Again, this goes to professionalism. We’ve all read reviews that pan a book for typos. It’s those sorts of errors that can detract so heavily from an otherwise enjoyable read. Whatever else, all books should be proof read before publication. It should be law.

    There are many sources to find editors. There’s me—I do all three types and I’ve got a lot of well-pleased clients! Reedsy has many free-lance contacts, as does She Writes. There are professional editor organizations: ACES has a very good list of freelance editors. Do an online search. Ask fellow writers; a personal referral is best. Be cautious of those “Publishers” that offer editorial services. A freelance editor with no vested interested in publishing your work is apt to provide more honest input.


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    Dear Extra Squeeze Team, Should I Just Give Up?

    March 31, 2019 by in category The Extra Squeeze by The Extra Squeeze Team tagged as , , , ,

    Dear Extra Squeeze Team, I just got my 20th rejection. Should I just give up?

    Rebecca Forster | Extra Squeeze
    Rebecca Forster 
    USA Today Bestselling author of 35 books, including the Witness series and the new Finn O’Brien series.

    Don’t give up!

    Learn!

    Something isn’t striking a chord with editors so figure it out.

    Perhaps your blurb is off-putting, the book is slow to start, pacing is awkward, or your characters aren’t defined.

    Are you sending the right work to the wrong editor?

    Have you truly defined your genre or are you waffling between two or even three?

    I often ask people about their genre only to hear “well, it’s sort of a historical, coming of age, horror novel with aliens”. That’s not going to fly with editors.

    Ask the most successful author you personally know to read your pitch and first chapters and give an honest opinion. If they cannot articulate their objections, then ask them to point out the areas where they got stuck or where they lost interest. Some of my best learning experiences have been through my rejection letters. I keep a file to remind me of my strengths and weakness. It is like having a tutorial at my fingertips

    P.S. I had a friend who write 70 books and when she hit, there was no looking back. Be objective about your work, learn, and move forward. Good luck.

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    Jenny Jensen | A Slice of Orange
    Jenny Jensen
    Developmental  editor who has worked for twenty plus years with new and established authors of both fiction and non-fiction, traditional and
    indie.

    Rejection – the inescapable bane of a writer’s life.

    JK Rowling in her own words received “loads” of rejections and now she posts them on Twitter to encourage aspiring writers. I think that’s wonderful and says it all. If writing and sharing your work (publishing) is your driving passion then no, never give up.

    It could, however, be time to ask yourself why. Publisher and agent rejections are based on a myriad of reasons. Sometimes you’ll get a form letter or you could receive a note with some details explaining the rejection. If you have, then study the reasons closely and consider revising your manuscript to accommodate the input. Hire an editor for a review from fresh eyes.

    If you’re 100% confident your story is ready for publication, take another look at your submissions material. Could there be a better way to present the story? Be certain you’ve submitted to the right publisher. Harlequin is not interested in political thrillers and a romance editor would likely not read past the first line of your letter.

    If you feel you have the perfect trifecta – manuscript, letter and synopsis – then keep on submitting until you land before the eyes of just that editor or agent who is looking for exactly what you’ve written. According to Ms. Rowling, that’s pretty much how it went for her: the right editor with the right eye and the right curiosity. Go for the long haul.

    Today’s huge Indie market allows a writer to bypass traditional publishing (which has always seemed to be somewhat arbitrary) without giving up the dream. Self-publishing is a lot of work on top of the time and effort invested in writing a novel. It’s not enough to simply post the book. You must publicize and tout and twitter and tweet, Facebook and Instagram and fish for reviews. Going that particular long haul gives the author far greater control and ROI than any traditional publisher will provide—especially to a first-time author.

    If you believe your work is the best it can be you have choices. Never give up.


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    Do I Need a Pseudonym to Write Fiction?

    February 28, 2019 by in category The Extra Squeeze by The Extra Squeeze Team, Writing tagged as , , ,
    Do I Need a Pseudonym | The Extra Squeeze Team | A Slice of Orange

    Dear Extra Squeeze Team

    Do I need a pseudonym to write fiction?

    Rebecca Forster | Extra Squeeze
    Rebecca Forster 
    USA Today Bestselling author of 35 books, including the Witness series and the new Finn O’Brien series.

    No, you don’t need a pseudonym to write fiction unless you write hard core erotica and you don’t want your mom to know. I used a pseudonym twice in my 30 year career. The first time I was writing for Harlequin and they contractually owned an author’s name. That meant if I wanted to write for anyone else I would have to leave the name–and any consumer base that had accrued to that name–behind. The second time was when I wrote my first legal thriller. The men were big back then–Grisham, Turow–and the publisher wanted readers to assume I was a man. I went by my last name but initials for my first. There was no ‘about the author’ in those books and the whole thing felt very odd. In this day and age when building a brand is your sole responsibility, own your name and build a loyal readership around it.

    Jenny Jensen | A Slice of Orange
    Jenny Jensen
    Developmental  editor who has worked for twenty plus years with new and established authors of both fiction and non-fiction, traditional and
    indie.

    Traditionally, publishing under an assumed name was a useful tactic when a writer crossed genres. A non-fiction author whose brand is based on expertise in hunting edible fungi would want to use a pseudonym to publish a steamy romance. A fresh identity to woo a new readership avoids any confusion, possibly even irritation from those readers whose expectations would not be met. A reader who gets a lusty countess when they’re expecting a description of the spotted Nigerian toadstool will not be a repeat reader.

    Fiction writers often use pseudonyms to switch between fiction genres. Robert Galbraith jumps (beautifully, I might add) between wizards and detective fiction. Harry Potter fans are diehards so it was wise for J.K. Rowling to present her new detective fiction under a pseudonym. Otherwise fans might have cast a withering spell when their expectations were squashed. Cormoran Strike solving crime was a big step off brand from Harry Potter.

    It wasn’t long before the public learned that Galbraith was J.K. Rowling—with a brand that strong anything she writes would be impossible to hide, and why hide it. With her pseudonym public knowledge readers knew what to expect. Rowling’s brand remains intact and Galbraith’s work took off with a new readership. Impossible to say how many of those new readers were enticed simply by the author’s name, but the work stands solidly on it’s own merits now.

    Your brand may not be as mighty as Rowling’s but it is as important to your success. No reason not to use a pseudonym to publish your fiction and no reason not to be completely open about it. Supplement the marketing of the fiction by using your existing fan base and marketing tools to launch this new facet of your career. Share the pseudonym on your twitter feed, tout the cover on your pinterest posts, introduce the new personae and the new fiction on your blog. If both your established name and your nom de plume are connected to your brand then fans can seek out whichever genre fits their reading expectations. And your brand is strengthened.


    Robin Blakely | The Extra Squeeze Team | A Slice of Orange
    Robin Blakely
    PR/Business Development coach for writers and artists; CEO, Creative Center of America; member, Forbes Coaches Council.

    From a branding perspective, maybe you do need a pen name to write fiction. Here are some questions you might ask yourself…if any of your answers are yes, lean toward a pen name. 

    Ask: Is my own name too difficult to say, spell, or remember?  Does my own name confuse readers with other authors or commercial brands?  Does the subject matter or the chosen genre of my fiction conflict with the character of the other brands that I am building?  Do I have a plan to manage the transparency required to promote a pen name?  

    If you answered yes to any of the above questions, explore the pen name option with enthusiasm and care. Remember: You are the brand.  The books you write are products of the brand. No matter what you do, you must be able to represent your brand and your products with authenticity and with transparency. 

    I once advised a mystery-writing dentist to use a pen name because his novel was filled with graphic violence and hot sex scenes. His novel directly conflicted with the business brand for his successful dental practice which was built upon his real name. The novel he had written revealed a side of the mild- mannered doctor that the public did not know and frankly might have been shocked to meet.  In that instance, using a pen name separated the dentist from the writer so that both could be promoted to proper audiences.  A pen name provided some distance between his dental business and his writing business.  A plan for transparency was built from the start so that he could be honest and open if patients realized that their beloved doctor was also that wild novelist.  

    Similarly, you might want to consider a pen name if you are writing fiction in genres that conflict with each other. The motivating idea would be to help the reader know and trust the brand name when they search for your work.  The bridge between who you really are and your pen name better be built from the start or it could become problematic unexpectedly with one Did you know social media post.


    H.O. Charles
    Cover designer and author of the fantasy series, The Fireblade Array

    H.O. is missing again this month. We suspect a long long holiday is to blame.

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    Dear Extra Squeeze Team: What the Heck Is a Platform?

    January 31, 2019 by in category The Extra Squeeze by The Extra Squeeze Team tagged as , , ,
    Platform | The Extra Squeeze Team | A Slice of Orange

    Dear Extra Squeeze Team, I’m working on my first book. I go to a local RWA and everyone is taking about platforms. What the heck is a platform? Why do I need one? How do I get one?


    Rebecca Forster | Extra Squeeze
    Rebecca Forster 
    USA Today Bestselling author of 35 books, including the Witness series and the new Finn O’Brien series.

    You’re in luck. The queen of platforms is Robin Blakely so I would read her answer first. If you’re reading this one, then my simple explanation is that a platform is who you are as an author. Are you queen of erotica? Are you the definitive word on thrillers? Were you a cop and write police procedurals? When you build your platform you are looking for a way to consistently communicate who you are as an author and what a reader can expect from your books. Keep writing and refining your voice. Write in the same genre. Determine what sets you apart from other writers and there you have it – a platform.


    H.O. Charles
    Cover designer and author of the fantasy series, The Fireblade Array

    I’m not sure I know either. Sounds a bit like business jargon!


    Jenny Jensen | A Slice of Orange
    Jenny Jensen
    Developmental  editor who has worked for twenty plus years with new and established authors of both fiction and non-fiction, traditional and
    indie.

    A platform is that giant, flashing interactive sign hanging in Times Square that says, “Here I am! I’m a writer and this is what my books are about. You want to read them all!”

    A platform gives you visibility as an author. It gives the means to speak to your audience, to gain and nurture a following. You get a platform by building it yourself. It’s a process; there is no ready recipe. And it takes time to build up your presence so there’s no reason not to begin long before you publish. You’re going to need it because that’s how and where an Indie writer markets her books.

    Social media is the tool, from your website to blogging to Facebook, to engaging with on-line writer groups to Pinterest, Instagram and Twitter— the whole gamut is possible. Your message should include your unique story and voice. The content should target your audience so that you can reach them directly with an option of back and forth communications.

    If you haven’t published yet, consider writing a few short stories and offer them for free. Post links on Face Book, or Twitter etc. to get the word out. Join and engage with writer’s groups. Use those short stories for award entries—the more accolades and experience you garner, the more powerful your platform. Blog about your writing process. Join groups with other new writers. It will all work to build your name and credibility.

    It takes time. But so does writing a good book. Like all things in life, time management is critical. Decide how much effort toward building your platform is doable without taking too big a bite out of your writing time. But know that every little bit will grow your presence and when you’re ready to publish you’ll have a platform from which to dive into the market.

    Robin Blakely | The Extra Squeeze Team | A Slice of Orange
    Robin Blakely
    PR/Business Development coach for writers and artists; CEO, Creative Center of America; member, Forbes Coaches Council.

    You need a platform so that you can elevate and protect your brand. To help you wrap your brain around a concept that can be very confusing, try this . . .

    Let’s imagine that your platform is a three-legged table and your brand is a glass ball on top of that table.  It seems like the glass ball is the thing to focus on, but really it is the table and its three legs that provide the support and elevation your brand needs. If the platform isn’t solid, the table top will teeter and the glass ball will roll and possibly break.

    So, let’s keep the brand safe and secure.  Let’s look closer at the platform’s three legs.

    One leg is all about promotional outreach—you must effectively tell readers about your work. One leg is all about resources—you must manage your time, money, and helpful people wisely.  One leg is all about constantly developing the core talent and skill to produce the best products and services you can create—you can’t sell what you never finish.

    You need each leg to do its part and at about the same level. In the platform world, the most common problem is that people figuratively build their platforms using table legs of three very different lengths. One leg is typically very long and well-developed, one leg is quite short and under-achieving, and one entire leg may be practically missing. Take a closer look at those three areas of your creative business.  When the three table legs of your platform are forced to operate at uneven lengths, it will feel like your success is teetering and wobbling—that your professional life is unbalanced and uncertain—that your brand is fragile and in jeopardy.

    Put an end to topsy-turvy, out-of-control feelings by building a platform to elevate and protect your beautiful talent-driven brand.  As you learn to level out the structural legs of your platform, feelings of uncertainty will be replaced by feelings of stability. Promotional opportunities will become better in both quality and abundance. As a result, your platform will command attention in your industry.  Your brand will be clearly showcased, elevated, and protected.

    Sound impossible? It isn’t.


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